A Thing of the Past: Legitimate Business FAQ

MAFIA:
DATE BEGUN: 08 May 2019
DATE SHELVED FOR CAVE ONE: 26 May 2019
DATE PICKED BACK UP: 22 Apr 2020
DATE FINISHED: 26 Apr 2020


don't think about how these heroes are directly descended from eachother
because then you'll realise that one being born in 1860 and the other being born in 1910 is kind of awkward timing


i'm going to write this here and hopefully i won't be right:
this one is very high-concept so i doubt i'll be able to finish it
(26 May 2019: i think i was right; i'm shelving it for now)

a depressing tale of a man who realises most of his friends (and girls whose boobs he wants to touch) are actually in the mafia
and he's a cop

except it isn't because i'm retarded

i went for a more uh dark tone and i don't know how well i did
in case you didn't catch the implication, the mafia cut out valerie's eye

mission 18-21 were written last after i shrunk the ending down to just one mission
i also had it as a 50 in-line with wild west but then i wrote high seas and realised the structure of that would work way better so i had to rearrange it all
this was the ORIGINAL ATOTP 2 but then it got shelved hard for almost a whole year

i took the bifidas thing from this one and put it into ATOTP Prehistory but i kept it in this one because this is where it originated from, and it's frankly better-executed here

again i'm not 100% happy with this one
but i think it was a fine experiment